I don’t really remember learning how to write. I know it was a long time ago, and that I didn’t really put the skill to much use other than what my academic pursuits demanded. Then I started teaching fourth grade, and I was expected to teach nine-year-olds how to write, among numerous other elementary school subjects. Since I didn’t really remember how or when I learned, in my mind it kind of just happened… I had no choice but to simply follow my district’s (and fellow teachers’) examples. Fair enough – the five-paragraph essay and linear writing process it is! And so it’s been for the past ten years. Except now I’ve completed the Capital Area Writing Project, and I’m continuing my pursuit of earning a Writing Specialist Certification. My attitude about writing has completely changed, and suddenly, the five-paragraph essay using the 4-square model and linear writing process aren’t enough. Not even close! Now granted, I believe, for the second semester in a row, that I am the only elementary teacher in the class, so my perspective on things may vary somewhat from those of you who teach middle or high school, college, or aren’t involved in teaching at all. My focus, at least for now, is how to help my nine-year-old students put aside their fear and hatred of writing (surprising that many of them have such a strong negative reaction at such an early age), and develop a love of writing that will actually serve them both academically and personally. A daunting task, but I believe an important one.
For this reason, Hairston’s “The Winds of Change” article captured (and kept) my attention from the minute I picked it up. I really became engrossed in her ideas about a shifting paradigm in teaching writing, and moving toward process-centered instruction. Her explanation what the paradigm shift involves, how it begins, opposition, etc., really helped me to understand what is occurring. I finished the article with a true feeling of hope that we’re heading in the right direction, and that in no time at all, we (writing teachers) would arrive at this wonderful place that held the answers to our questions about how to effectively teach students how to write. Then I looked at the article’s publication date… 1982! Are you kidding me! This paradigm shift has been in the works for almost thirty years and we’re not there yet? I get that change is often slow, but three decades? I was floored, not to mention immensely disappointed. (A glass of pinot noir helped me through it, but still!)
Next I moved on to Lynn’s, Rhetoric and Compostion: An Introduction. In addition to appreciating his definitions of composition and rhetoric, I enjoyed his reference to an “uninformed” approach to teaching writing as, “Curricular administrators, school boards, and teachers, … continue to do many of the very things that decades of research and the consensus of experts have declared to be ineffective and sometimes even possibly injurious.” Again referencing the paradigm shift addressed by both Hairston and Lynn, three decades in the making and we still don’t get it?
Now, I tend to have an idealistic view of the world, even though I’ve learned repeatedly that this is not reality. But the Hairston and Lynn readings were just the jump start I needed to get my butt into gear and start planning to teach differently. (Of course the CAWP was the original jump start, but I tend to procrastinate! By the way, is it really 8:00 p.m. already?) Just the idea that the writing process is, “messy, recursive, convoluted, and uneven” (Hairston, 85) is a new way of thinking for me and opens so many possibilities for teaching students! I can’t wait to dig out my “Steps of the Writing Process” poster cut it into sections that I can display in a “non-linear” fashion. I still have a few more months before I get back to the classroom, and I hope to use that time wisely to really make some positive changes to my writing instruction, and hopefully share ideas with my district to make changes at various levels.
As for North’s article, the main thing I took away was the idea of community, and how I could apply this to my peer editing lessons at school. I work hard in my class to help the students develop a strong sense of community amongst themselves, and when successful, it really carries over into tasks such as peer editing, problem solving, etc. I will continue to help the students develop these skills, not only to aide in writing and other academic endeavors, but also to become productive members of society.
So in answer to the original question, “Mom, are we there yet?” The answer is, “No.” But the more important answer, as increasing numbers of teachers and students become aware of the paradigm shift and the surrounding issues of rhetoric and composition, is, “But we’re getting there…”
I become easily inspired, and so I, too, bought into "The Winds of Change" quite easily. I so very much want to be apart of this paradigm shift. I want my students to love to write and love to write well. It is disheartening to see that this shift has been in the process for thirty years already. I just have to say that it reminds me of what many teachers walk the halls saying to new teachers. "Don't worry. You won't care as much soon enough." I'm not sure that is true for me though. I have been an educator for eight years now, and I have never once lost my motivation to be a better teacher and to try to reach my students. I am driven by the idea that I could stumble upon the one idea that works best for my students. So each day, I will try to make that paradigm shift in my classroom.
ReplyDeleteSo no worries, even if we are traveling the road for another thirty years, I'll have my car out there navigating all the ups and downs with you!
By the way, I love your style of writing!
I love reading about how many of us were so affected by Hairston's article. In high school, my teachers were fairly progressive (early 90s), and we did multiple drafts, lots of freewriting, and tons of journals, both responding to literature and musing about life. At the time, I couldn't believe we had to write so much. Now, I'm so glad I did.
ReplyDeleteI always had my student journal, and I read and responded to them. In middle school, they often journaled about their lives, but sometimes I gave them a topic. Most seemed to like journaling, though they didn't like "formal" writing quite as much. We did quite a bit of creative writing, and when we got to the dreaded five paragraph essay, I guided them through it as best as I could. I talked with them about different types of writing and how certain situations call for certain kinds of writing, and I found that the more honest I was with students, the less fearful they were. I also showed them that that dreaded five paragraph essay didn't have to be dull and boring and encouraged them to put their own personal style into it . . . something middle schoolers love to do but are still developing.
I look forward to reading your thoughts about teaching the elementary student. I have a son in fifth grade and a daughter in first, so I am developing a new found interest in younger writers.
I'm glad I wasn't the only one who read the article before looking at the publication date! It did knock the wind out of me in a way. I too was feeling really renewed and excited about the possibilities, but when I realized how long ago it was written, it was disheartening. But, I love and agree with the way you end your blog...we are getting there...and it's so positive to think about how all of us will take what we learn here and share it with our current or future colleagues and administrators. As the word spreads, the shift continues.
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ReplyDeleteI'm not certain that the revolution/paradigm shift hasn't occurred. I think it definitely has. However, I also believe experience has taught (and is currently teaching)us that writing is not an all or nothing, black and white process, but one that needs to be strategic and dependent upon situation. As I read, I identified with strategies from both the current-traditional and process pedagogy camps, and I use both to assist my students with their writing.
ReplyDeleteAlthough it may seem attractive to focus only on process pedagogy, there is definitely a time and place where nothing but seemingly outdated prescriptive methods will suffice. The current politically driven focus on testing and the (dreaded) ensuing PSSA five paragraph essay are prime examples, as are the types of assignments often encountered in freshman comp. courses. That is not to say invention and creativity are not appreciated, but they are often unrewarded and unsolicited in such contexts.
It seems to me a blend of both, and helping students (and ourselves) to realize that each offers useful strategies for our toolboxes, is the great result of this paradigm shift.